Showing posts with label Polishing is Pure Pleasure. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Polishing is Pure Pleasure. Show all posts

Saturday, October 29, 2011

Polishing your memoir for publication


Wednesday I encouraged you to discern whether you’re in the Tweaking is Torture camp or the Polishing is Pure Pleasure camp. (See Two types of memoir writers: Which are you?*)


If you’re aiming for a professional, published memoir with book-signings and speaking engagements and press releases and royalty checks, you need to be in the Polishing is Pure Pleasure camp—or if “pure pleasure” is too fanatical, join the Polishing is a Priority pack.


Even the most talented writers belong to the Polishing is a Priority pack.


Whether you choose the traditional publishing route with an agent and publisher, or the increasingly attractive self-publishing route, you must concern yourself with the art and craft of writing: grammar, punctuation, diction, style, editing, rewriting, polishing, and so much morenot with your first draft, or even your fifth, but before your final draft.


Roseanne Rini has this advice for writers: "In my experience, writers tend to stop themselves by being overly concerned about mistakes or what their reader might think about what they're saying. I always tell people to set those concerns aside and just write what comes to them in the moment. The important thing is to get their thoughts down on paper or on the screen. Then they can go back and cut out what doesn't belong, correct errors, re-organize, etc. But with the first draft one should allow oneself total freedom." (emphasis mine; from http://womensmemoirs.com/editors-on-editing/editors-on-editing-an-editor-is-writing-her-own-memoir)


If you belong to the Polishing is a Priority pack, invest in a few excellent how-to books. My shelves house a number of well-worn volumes:


On Writing Well, by William Zinsser,

The Craft of Writing, by Donald M. Murray,

The Elements of Style, by William Strunk and E.B. White,

The Writer’s Portable Mentor: A Guide to Art, Craft, and the Writing Life, by Priscilla Long,

Woe is I: The Grammarphobe’s Guide to Better English and Plain English, by Patricia T. O’Conner,

Keys for Writers: A Brief Handbook, by Ann Raimes,

Proofreading Plain and Simple, by Debra Hart May,

1,818 Ways to Write Better and Get Published, by Scott Edelstein,

The Little Handbook of Perfecting the Art of Christian Writing, by Leonard Goss and Don Aycock,

Eats, Shoots & Leaves: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation, by Lynne Truss,

An Introduction to Christian Writing, by Ethel Herr.


Yesterday I ordered a new book to add to my collection: The Plot Whisperer, by Martha Alderson, published only a few days ago. It looks like a valuable, inspirational resource for memoir writers.


WOW! Women On Writing is offering an online class, (an e-course), The Unwilling Grammarian, by Karlyn Thayer. It starts November 30, 2011, and lasts four weeks. Here’s an excerpt from the course description:


“Do you hate grammar like you hate snakes? This class, The Unwilling Grammarian, takes an easy and fun approach to grammar.… Students will look at grammar with a new perspective—not as a necessary evil, but as a study that's understandable and satisfying.”




Whether you plan to make a few photocopies of your memoir, for friends and family, or hope to publish a book you’ll find on bookstore shelves across the nation, your stories are important.*


“… Anytime someone grows and changes over time
on a deep and meaningful level
from the challenges they confront
and then shares that experience [with] others,
the memoirist empowers others to believe
that such a transformation is available to them, as well.”
Martha Alderson, author, The Plot Whisperer


What writing books and resources can you recommend? Do you know of any good writers’ conferences? Please leave a comment below.


*Related links:
Two types of memoir writers: Which are you?

Your stories are important,

Jeff Goins’ quote, 



Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Two types of memoir writers: Which are you?



A few of you are aiming for a professional, published memoir with book-signings and speaking engagements and press releases.


Others plan to make a few photocopies of your memoir for friends and family; you’re not dreaming of making it onto the New York Times Best-Seller list.


I applaud both kinds of memoirs! I’ve written both types and found equal joy and fulfillment in them.


If you’re not sure which type your finished memoir will be, let me ask:


Are you in the Tweaking is Torture camp or the Polishing is Pure Pleasure camp?


You’re in the Tweaking is Torture camp if you view grammar as an ambiguity and proofreading as punishment.


Toiling to include details* discourages you and writing leads* leaves you dismayed.


You’re in the Tweaking is Torture camp if you can't stand editing and revising your stories.


A few of you would rather have a tooth pulled without anesthesia than to fuss with a manuscript.


If you prefer writing your memoir in a less-than-rigorous manner and if royalty checks are not your goal—that’s OK! Really!


Your readers will treasure your memoir and you will have achieved your ultimate goal: Telling future generations what you’ve seen God do in and for you and your family (Deuteronomy 4:9, Deuteronomy 6:4-9).


On the other hand, if you’re in the Polishing is Pure Pleasure camp, you’re downright giddy working with words and sentence length and rhythm.


You stay up late into the night reading books and blogs about writing.


You get fired up over new writing tips and can’t wait to fine-tune your rough drafts.


You’re in the Polishing is Pure Pleasure camp if you lose track of time sitting in front of your computer screen: reworking and honing and rewriting.


You spiff up your manuscripts and welcome comments from your critique group.


Melissa Marsh’s words will resonate with you:

“When you're writing,
do you ever get that feeling of pure joy deep in your gut?
Like this is what you're supposed to be doing with your life?
Like this activity completes you?”
(Melissa Marsh, 


So, in which camp are you: Tweaking is Torture, or Polishing is Pure Pleasure?


If Tweaking is Torture describes you, and if stress and frustration bubble up when you face the craft and art of writing, I hereby give you permission to ignore my suggestions about those topics.


I’m serious!


Instead, focus solely on getting your God-and-you stories in writing. Always remember that’s your most important goal.


In my memoir classes, I say: Placing your stories in friends’ and relatives’ hands is your most important goal even if your memoir is not a literary masterpiece.


Recently the mailman delivered Sharon Lippincott’s The Heart and Craft of Lifestory Writing.* She preaches the same message. Take a look:


Sharon writes:


“… Writing even a little bit, even a single letter or story, is better than writing nothing.… None of my forebears wrote lengthy stories, but however short, I treasure them, and they are better than nothing.


“Don’t worry about what to say, or whether it’s worth the effort, or whether you have time to write a document the size of a James Michener novel. Anything you write will be better than nothing!” (Sharon Lippincott, The Heart and Craft of Lifestory Writing*)


Whether you’re like me—I enjoy puttering around in my rough drafts and refining, adding this and deleting that—or you belong to the “Anything you write will be better than nothing” camp, sign up as a Follower of this blog (top right), or follow on e-mail (below the Followers’ photos) and I’ll dump heaps of tips and ideas on you in coming months.


“Whether or not you write well, write bravely."
Bill Stout


Next time: More on Polishing is Pure Pleasure

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In the right column, you’ll find a link to Sharon Lippincott’s blog, The Heart and Craft of Life Writing.
You can buy Sharon’s book, The Heart and Craft of Lifestory Writing, through her blog.