Always remember the things you’ve seen God do for you, and be sure to tell your children and grandchildren!
I'm not a huge fan of the rewriting process. I'd rather it be fluent and easily understood in the first draft, but I know that's not possible. So, I make myself do the rewriting, and I'm usually happy with the results. It takes work to make something good.
I think everyone can identify with you, Victoria! We wish we could make our first draft fluent and clear and -- well, perfect! You do know the happy results of rewriting, though. Good for you! Keep writing!