Suspense, tension, conflict. They are must-haves for your
memoir. They draw readers into your story, make them care about you, and keep
them reading.
Last week I shared
a Chip MacGregor quote that I’ve been putting into practice in one of my rough
drafts: I’m trying to make suspenseful passages more reader-friendly. Chip’s
message: Readers don’t want to waste time in your long, drawn out moanings and
groanings. They bought your book because they want to know how you solved your
problem.
“Readers don’t buy books that ponder problems. They buy
books that offer great solutions to problems. So offer solutions. Tell me what
the answer is to my problem.” He says we
should go ahead and “set the stage by revealing what the conflict or problem
is,” but (my paraphrase): Get on with it. Don’t wallow in your drama. Condense your
drama. (Chip MacGregor, Memorable Words; emphasis mine.)
On the other hand, we can play downplay our suspense too
much, according to K.S. Davis.
She teaches her students (both fiction and memoir writers) to
beware of a “failure to sustain key moments.” Key moments: moments of tension
and suspense and emotion.
In some of her students’ rough drafts, Davis discovered key
moments “were just going by too quickly.” To remedy that, she advises, “…Writers,
don’t be afraid to slow down and ‘linger.’ Make sure you are devoting
sufficient space to the ‘key moments’ in your manuscript so that they register
with your readers. Your writing will resonate much more clearly and vividly if
you do.”
She says we “give the moment sufficient emphasis” by using
dialogue, summarizing unspoken thoughts, and using nuance. (Read K.S. Davis’s
full blog post, Lessons in Lingering.)
So, the combined message from Chip and K.S. is this: Find a healthy balance in writing passages of suspense
and drama and emotion.
You might be saying, “Easier said than done!” I agree. Here’s what I’m doing and perhaps
you’ll find it helpful, too:
I’m crafting a couple of versions of my vignette and playing
around with the drama—condensing, reorganizing. (I’m so glad we live in the
days of computers instead of typewriters! Back in the olden days, if we wanted
to change just one word or comma on a page, we’d have to retype the entire
page!)
After tweaking, I’ll set the manuscript aside for a week or
so. Later I’ll take a fresh look at it and by then I should be able to see what
works and what doesn’t.
What about you? What advice can you share about finding
balance between too much drama and not enough? Leave a comment below.
